i will include a cnc just for you
well its a 5/10
im sure you wanted all the black, maybe for text, but it doesnt look so good
im also not a big fan because of how it messes with the lighting, which is there, its just hard to see
i would suggest expanding the borders of the black, enough to establish good flow and depth, there is none btw
i know you want the black so just expand enough to make those qualities known
besides that, good effects and i see the start of what could be awesome flow