oh :O jinchuriki. now i remember you. damn you keep changing ur username every single time.
i can see you have improved a bit. and that's good. still you gotta learn how to reposition the render. and dont put effetcs or stuff ON TOP of the render. that's not good. Work on brackground and you will get better. i can see you have some nice potential. you just have to work on it. I like some of the ideas. 7/10